Evil Neighbor Chapter 11

Evil Neighbor Chapter 11
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My head was swimming. Sarah thought Michael 

was a problem. Michael thought Sarah was 

What do you mean?I messaged Michael

What did you see?” 

Michael: Sarah’s always so organized, uses 

firstly.secondly. But after she went quiet for 

a while, after the cop showed up, her messages 

were all jumbled.” 

He was right. Sarah’s accusations against 

Michael had been strangely unconvincing. Not 

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Michael sent another flurry of messages

079 

Speaking of the coponly one came to your 

door, right

That’s not standard procedure. They always 

send two, even if one’s a rookie

Are you sure you only saw one?” 

Yes! Just one. Positive!I replied

Michael

Something’s definitely wrong. I’m calling 911. Not using that cell number. Something’s off 

about that. Direct to 911.” 

He stopped texting. He was calling

I replayed the night’s events. Something about 

John bothered me. He was initially against 

calling the police, but he ended up calling? If 

the cop was fake, wasn’t John in on it too? He 

started the new group chat right before the 

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copshowed up, kept everyone focused on 

that chat, then gave us the fake cop’s 

070 

numberWas the group chat a way to keep us 

from calling 911 directly

And the copnot wanting me to open the 

doorMaybe he was afraid I’d recognize him 

as a fake if I saw him up close

I was starting to believe Michael. He was calling 

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Then, Michael’s next message made my blood 

run cold

Called 911. Couldn’t give them a clear reason

so they’re sending a patrol car to check. 20-30 

minutes

Butthe dispatcher said they hadn’t received 

any calls from our building

Stay inside. Lock your doors. Wait for the real 

police

I don’t know what the hell is going on. I’m 

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waiting.” 

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If Michael wasn’t lying, I was right. John was involved. He hadn’t called 911. The cop was a fake. That’s why his cap was so low he didn’t want to be seen on the lobby security cameras

What about David? I still didn’t understand, but 

it was all connected somehow

But what if Michael was lying? What if he knew 

I was supposed to check on Chris and was trying to stop me? Because now John and 

Sarah were messaging me in the smaller group 

chat, urging me to go to Chris’s door

What was I supposed to do

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I decided to stay put. It was too dangerous to 

go out. But I typed a quick message in the 

group chat

く 

Okay, going over there now. Will update.” 

I wasn’t going anywhere

The group chat went silent. Waiting for me

No. 

Seconds later, noises from my balcony

Footsteps? But how

Then I realized 

– 

someone was climbing. Shoes 

scraping against the wall. I looked. A dark rope

almost invisible against the night sky, was 

swaying

Sarah had said we could climb between 

balconies. Two floors down from Sarah was me

I grabbed a kitchen knife, stood trembling by 

the balcony door. A figure rappelled down the 

rope, landing silently on the railing. He was 

wearing a uniform. A police uniform

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This was the fake cop

I raised the knife, adrenaline surging, fear 

making my legs weak

The intruder saw me

And then he screamed

A ghost!” 

He let go of the rope, falling backwards

I stared, dumbfounded. A ghost

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He wasn’t looking at me. He was looking behind 

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I felt a chill. I slowly turned… 

David’s face. Inches from mine. Terrifying

Everything went black

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I woke up to bright lights and police officers. They took my statement, explained what happened

Two men, Mark and Alex, had targeted our building. They’d heard it was newly renovated, assumed the residents were wealthy. They’d worn security guard uniforms as a disguise, climbed up the outside of the building, starting with 4. 204 and 304 were empty. But 404… 

David, Amy, and their baby. All dead

The intruders found little of value, so they went up to 504. John. He was dead too. Mark and Alex had been using his phone the whole time. That’s why John never appeared when the fake cop came to my door

They were ready to leave, but Mark realized his 

personal cell phone was missing. If the police 

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apartment, planning to go back to 404 to look 

for it

That’s when the baby started crying again

Loudly. Waking everyone up

Mark and Alex panicked. They were sure the 

baby was dead. They used John’s phone, monitored the chat, stalled for time

Then Chris went to 404. And disappeared. He 

was later found unconscious inside David’s apartment. No one knew how he got in

Chris’s disappearance terrified the intruders. They thought he’d figured them out. Now they had to find Chris and the phone. That’s why Johnmessaged me privately

The fake cop didn’t want me to open the door because he was afraid I’d see through his 

disguise, and he didn’t know if Chris was with me, waiting to ambush him

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After the fake cop left, Mark and Alex went up to 601. Sarah was dead. They needed a better vantage point to get to my apartment. Michael was right Sarah’s later messages had been sent by someone else. One of the intruders

They decided Mark would rappel down to my balcony. To kill me. And Chris, if he was there

But Mark saw David. And fell. Alex, tethered to the same rope, fell too

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That’s how the night unfolded. The only thing 

no one could explainwas David

Was he a ghost? The police report didn’t say

But I knew he hadn’t meant me any harm. He’d used Chris’s phone to send the all clear” 

message. Why? His family was dead. He could 

have told us the truth. Maybe he thought the 

have told us the truth. Maybe he thought the 

intruders were too dangerous. He wanted us to 

stay safe. He’d lost everything, and he… 

wanted us to be okay.

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